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PROFILE By Uzair Shah

Raza Muhammad Memon

A Young Boy, Committed To His Goals

Nobody in this world gets a perfect life since birth, but some people make it perfect with true determination and hard work. Raza Muhammad Memon is one of those people who made his struggles since childhood to have a better life. He is a young boy who has achieved most of his early life goals. He is a guy who challenged today’s world and won almost every battle. He, by his life, teaches everyone the art to face, survive, win and be at top in this world. He has been a successful student for years, acquired high grads and many awards throughout his student life. Now entering into profession life, he kept his nature same, and got himself selected at many good posts one after other. He is now the Deputy District Officer (D.D.O) Bps-17 Social Welfare, Government of Sindh.

Raza has proved that everything can be achieved with hard work. The best thing in his small career was that he has been very much consistent on all stages of life. Since childhood he set his mind to achieve nothing but best. In school life Raza was among the brilliant students from very beginning. As he started taking 1^st position from class one and lasted it till class eight. Despite, he also broke the record of highest scorer by taking 700 marks out of 900 marks. He got good grads in matriculation, intermediate and graduation. Being consistent he took over all 2^nd position in M.Sc degree at N.I.P.S Islamabad while securing positions in all four semesters of M.Sc degree.

According to Raza M. Memon, ‘His priority and emphasis always remain on learning new things from environment’ and ‘to strive for excellence; to live in such environment that enhances his knowledge has been his objective’. He further added, “I have always been committed to my aims, I always keep making struggles to achieve what I aim.”

Besides his brilliance in academics, Raza has acquired a good name in the field of English language teaching. With studies Raza continued teaching English language in different institutes for years. He has earned a great respect in the field of teaching. In this regard, Raza has been awarded with Pride of Performance for rendering dedicated services for the students, he was also declared best teacher of the year by Stream Line English Language Institute in 2016.

Raza Muhammad Memon was born in Hyderabad in 1991, completed his matriculation in 2006 from Government (N) Noor Muhammad High School, intermediate in 2008 from Muslim College. He was graduated in 2010 from University of Sindh, Jamshoro, and did his masters in 2014 from Quaid-e-Azam University, Islamabad. He qualified exams of Data entry operator in 2010, and Inter grade drawing in 2005. Entering into professional life Raza was appointed as Lecturer of Pakistan Studies in PIES Groups of Schools and Colleges, Barakahu, Islamabad in 2014, and Lecturer in Punjab Group of Colleges, Hyderabad in 2015. He was qualified for the post of Line Superintendent (L.S) Wapda, Federal Govt but did not join. At the age of 25, he became commission officer in Sindh Government by passing commission of Deputy District Officer (D.D.O) Bps-17 in March 20016.

Raza has been awarded many times in his life. He received his first award when he was in class 6. He got Bazmi Sathi Award for breaking last achieved highest marks in history of Noor Muhammad High School. In 2008 he was declared the best compare of the year 2008. He was awarded 3 times “Latif Award” by Mehran Council Islamabad on securing positions in all semesters respectively 2012, 2013 and 2014. He was also given Award of Best Teacher of the year in 2016 by Stream Line English Language Institute.

Raza Muhammad Memon got various opportunities to participate in events like Khudi Festival of Ideas (FOI), Youth declaration and many more. He participated in Youth Leadership Development Program in 2012, in International Conference in Best Western Hotel, Islamabad in 2013, in Khudi Festival of Ideas by KHUDI at Lahore in 2013, in Youth Declaration Contest at Pakistan Institute for Parliamentary Services (PIPS), Islamabad in 2014. Raza had been a member of Active Citizen of British Council, Sustainable Policy Institute, Islamabad.

A cousin of Raza said, “Raza has very pleasant nature. He is very helpful to all of us at every stage of our lives.” All family members and teachers of Raza are very happy at his success and proud of him. Raza Muhammad Memon is a role model for every young student.

Make intro more interesting, compare and contrast technique can also be used. Its is describing a personality.  not  biographical style, bit semi informal 

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PROFILE Raza Muhammad Memon 

By Uzair Shah

A Young Boy, Committed To His Goals

Raza Muhammad Memon has achieved most of his early life goals. He has been a successful student for years. He acquired high grads and many awards throughout his student life. Now entering into profession life, he kept his nature same, and got himself selected at many good posts one after other. He is now the Deputy District Officer (D.D.O) Bps-17 Social Welfare Government of Sindh.

Raza has proved that everything can be achieved with hard work. The best thing in his small career was that he has been very much consistent on all stages of life. Since childhood he set his mind to achieve nothing but best. In school life Raza was among the brilliant students from very beginning. As he started taking 1^st position from class one and lasted it till class eight. 
He also broke the record of highest scorer by taking 700 marks out of 900 marks. He got good grads in matriculation, intermediate and graduation. Being consistent he took over all 2^nd position in M.Sc degree at N.I.P.S Islamabad while securing positions in all four semesters of M.Sc degree.

According to Raza M. Memon, ‘His priority and emphasis always remain on learning new things from environment’ and ‘to strive for excellence; to live in such environment that enhances his knowledge has been his objective’. He further added, “I have always been committed to my aims, I always keep making struggles to achieve what I aim.”

Besides his brilliance in academics, Raza has acquired a good name in the field of English language teaching. With studies Raza continued teaching English language in different institutes for years. He has earned a great respect in the field of teaching. In this regard, Raza has been awarded with Pride of Performance for rendering dedicated services for the students, he was also declared best teacher of the year by Stream Line English Language Institute in 2016.

Raza Muhammad Memon was born in Hyderabad in 1991, completed his matriculation in 2006 from Noor Muhammad High School, intermediate in 2008 from Muslim College. He was graduated in 2010 from University of Sindh, Jamshoro, and did his masters in 2014 from Quaid-e-Azam University, Islamabad. He qualified exams of Data entry operator in 2010, and Inter grade drawing in 2005. 

Entering the professional life Raza was appointed as Lecturer of Pakistan Studies in PIES Groups of Schools and Colleges, Barakahu, Islamabad in 2014, and Lecturer in Punjab Group of Colleges, Hyderabad in 2015. He was qualified for the post of Line Superintendent (L.S) Wapda, Federal Govt but did not join. At the age of 25, he became commission officer in Sindh Government by passing commission of Deputy District Officer (D.D.O) Bps-17 in March 20016.

Raza has been awarded many times in his life. He received his first award when he was in class 6. He got Bazmi Sathi Award for breaking last achieved highest marks in history of Noor Muhammad High School. In 2008 he was declared the best compare of the year 2008. He was awarded 3 times “Latif Award” by Mehran Council Islamabad on securing positions in all semesters respectively 2012, 2013 and 2014. He was also given Award of Best Teacher of the year in 2016 by Stream Line English Language Institute.

Raza Muhammad Memon got various opportunities to participate in events like Khudi Festival of Ideas (FOI), Youth declaration and many more. He participated in Youth Leadership Development Program in 2012, in International Conference in Islamabad in 2013, in Khudi Festival of Ideas by KHUDI at Lahore in 2013, in Youth Declaration Contest at Pakistan Institute for Parliamentary Services (PIPS), Islamabad in 2014. Raza had been a member of Active Citizen of British Council, Sustainable Policy Institute, Islamabad.

A cousin of Raza said, “Raza has very pleasant nature. He is very helpful to all of us at every stage of our lives.” All family members and teachers of Raza are very happy at his success and proud of him. Raza Muhammad Memon is a role model for every young student.